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Yeah I thought it was a good commentary. One thing I would consider changing, though, is the volume of your intro. For me, it was quite a bit louder than the rest of the commentary. Other than that I thought it was good! You kept me interested and I learned something new with the findmakarov website. I just made my first commentary, and am looking for feedback as well so if you get the time and can check it out that'd be great!